The art is good, content is pretty good overall with a good visual presentation. Aspect Ratio is a little too large when in Window mode for the browser, so you have to play Full Screen, not a deal breaker but annoying. The biggest issue is there is way too much dialogue. There's so much talking that you loose interest pretty quickly and then that means you miss out on the sexual descriptions of the scenes. Like I get it, it's a visual novel so you're going to read but what you're writing has to grab the reader's attention and this just doesn't.